Good animation BUUUUT.....
I loved the art style and the animation but I have to say the voice acting was ABSOLUTELY TERRIBLE and really took away from the overall quality. Alot of people who create their own animation insist on voice acting it themselves or by friends or the first person to come along saying OH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE LET ME BE NAVI!!!
But nothing kills the audio quality more then;
1)Talking too fast
2)Talking incoherently
3)Getting that loud breath blast into the mic
And unfortunatly this animation had all of these downfalls.
For future animations for voice acting I suggest you go to http://voiceacting.proboards62.com/in dex.cgi or http://voiceactingalliance.com/board/ both of these places are overflowing with talented voice actors willing to lend their pipes.
I'm not trying to bash you at all I just really believe you have alot of potential and just offering you some constructive criticism.